Very good, but I think one thing you're missing - some footage of the car externally as it goes past the camera, and also being tracked by a camera car in formation.
Then you could try and hit up a community TV station to get a show!
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Here's a video of a Bentley Arnage being dismantled (one of my dream cars):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKwvMRcK4MU